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WEDNESDAY, SEPTEMBER 04, 2019
You are aesthetically pleasing,
the reason for which I first noticed in you.
And later I found your personality equally pleasing.
I also noted your chest to waist ratio is suitable for birthing.
Therefore, I think you should live in my house.
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alishahnovin
This poem is a . The poem may need to be expanded. This poem has been nominated for . I love you, (!) For your unparalled beauty () your warm...

Alamir

Alamir

This is why it took Mill 21 years until he finally married his wife Taylor... she didn't want to be treated as a tool.

Keshiaaa

Keshiaaa

I like this.
It's simple, and I smiled while reading it.
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alishahnovin

ALISHAHNOVIN

Replying to Keshiaaa:
Glad you like it... I guess a utilitarian poem is allowed to make someone smile, as part of the utility of a poem is to evoke emotion.

Keshiaaa

Keshiaaa

I swear. No emotion was present in the smile.
REPLIES: alishahnovin

alishahnovin

ALISHAHNOVIN

Replying to Keshiaaa:
A smile to indicate approval, whilst not relying on emotion...a utilitarian smile. I dig.

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