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MONDAY, JULY 04, 2011
 

PINKY PROMISE

MATTY

Creative Writing

As we walk side by side, i feel as if we are one.
Connected only by the smallest finger on the hand,
its a silent promise to love you forever.
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Matty

MATTY

Found some old stuff I had jotted down some time ago. It's funny how "forever" never lasts.

Hogan

Hogan

In the last scene of Stanley Kubrick's Eyes Wide Shut Bill (Tom Cruise) uses the word "forever", referring to he and his wife Alice (Nicole Kidman)'s rekindled love. She tells him not to use that word, "forever", because it frightens her. It's too long.

The scene, and the movie, ends when Alice says, "There's only one thing we have to do now." Bill asks, "What's that?" and Alice replies, "Fuck."
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alishahnovin

alishahnovin

I only deal in conditional forevers.
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Matty

MATTY

Replying to Hogan:
hahaha I vaguely remember the scene. Alice has the right idea though.

Matty

MATTY

Replying to alishahnovin:
You make them sign a contract first? LOL It may just work out better that way.

Sorrel

Sorrel

Matt, "forever" lasts; life just happens in the meantime.

Hogan, I like that scene because it strays from the standard/stereotypical portrayal of the hysterical/sentimental woman.

Alishah, are you speaking in code?
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alishahnovin

alishahnovin

Replying to Sorrel:
I also only speak in code.
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